- Make more reference to existing videos in your shot choices section. - In your digipak work, explore the reasons why those artists tend to use concept based designs on their digipak (and therefore why you chose to challenge this). - Make a direct comparison (preferably with images) between your own magazine ad and examples that you looked at.
Each section requires a little more detail I'm afraid. But you are heading in the right direction.
Good so far Kim.
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- Make more reference to existing videos in your shot choices section.
- In your digipak work, explore the reasons why those artists tend to use concept based designs on their digipak (and therefore why you chose to challenge this).
- Make a direct comparison (preferably with images) between your own magazine ad and examples that you looked at.
Each section requires a little more detail I'm afraid. But you are heading in the right direction.